Student Feedback- First draft of music video

In our lesson today we had the whole class evaluate what we had of our music video so far. We did this so that we could get other peoples feedback on the editing and the story line so that we could improve what we have already . This helps a lot because you may not see the mistakes that you have made where as overs who have watched it for the first time will be able to notice the mistakes. Overall everyone seemed to like the first draft of the music video, in particular the story line behind it because it is unique .

Positive feedback

• People said that they liked the initial concept of the video because it is unique and fun which will keep the audience interested and also fits well with the genre of music we are doing .
• They were impressed with the fact that we had synced the lip syncing nicely.
• The Fast pace editing where Lewis turns form one character to another because it flow smoothly .
• They found the video funny which is what we wanted out of the video, this way we can keep the audience interested and laughing which will create more of a global audience .

Negative feedback to improve the video

• One of the big things that we need to change is to hit the impact points better this way it will make the video stand out better 
• We also need to start filtering the video so that the quality looks better .
• We need to get the beginning finished because with out the beginning the video doesn't fully make sense .