2. Not enough examples from real texts. It starts off brilliantly comparing your vid next to real Ska vids (e.g. Madness), but as the Prezi goes on the links to real music vids disappear! So for editing, CLAMPS, etc. you're mentioning the right things but not showing them.
3. Slides 70-76 could do with brief annotations to demonstrate exact points
4. Conclusion is always nice - even if just saying you used, developed and challenged some conventions, with maybe a e.g for each.
Excellent BUT not perfect and a few bits to do:
ReplyDelete1. Ska not Sca!
2. Not enough examples from real texts. It starts off brilliantly comparing your vid next to real Ska vids (e.g. Madness), but as the Prezi goes on the links to real music vids disappear! So for editing, CLAMPS, etc. you're mentioning the right things but not showing them.
3. Slides 70-76 could do with brief annotations to demonstrate exact points
4. Conclusion is always nice - even if just saying you used, developed and challenged some conventions, with maybe a e.g for each.
Well done otherwise
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oh yeah,
ReplyDelete5. Ancillary tasks - sorry!
Yep! OK! A
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