Good points:
- Good idea because it is unique
- Funny and interesting which keeps the audience drawn in
- Casting right - well acted
- Clear narrative which syncs with the music
Bad points:
- Need more clarity on the rabbit hole bit.
- In bathroom scene he has jacket on going in but then doesn't have it on when out, isn't clear he is in shorts
- Impact points at the start need to be edited a bit more to grab attention of the audience straight away, a lot better towards end
- Need to white balance some of the clips .

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